jonsaviours
  Junior Member

Thank you.

The nature imagery is intoxicatingly vivid and apt, rich with amazing sensory details, this poem is a beautiful love letter to mother nature.
Congrats.

Thank you, Howl was my inspiration writing this, I'm so glad someone noticed.

Vivid and haunting.

Thanks, I'm very happy to hear that.

thanks a lot.

Thanks for the kind words, I'm really grateful.

Thank you.

Thanks for the vote, I'm glad you liked it.

Congrats on the win.

Your poem effectively captures the nostalgia of childhood and the allure of simple pleasures, it subtly touches on themes of poverty and resourcefulness. The children's eagerness to trade rags for toys highlights the scarcity they face.
It has a strong narrative and subtle social commentary. more »

Well written

thank you

Impressive

Thanks, I'm very glad you liked it.