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Pacifist... Poet

  March 2024     3 days ago

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Thank you Steven, this is beautiful.
I don't know if I deserve a poem.

4 days ago

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glad to have been of service.

9 days ago

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Will Powell's Mutiny, Dear Virginia by Boykeats and On Hope and Liberation
John W. May.
Had 4 votes during the voting period And Epic of Tribes had only three.
Logically if votes are counted. It would be highly unfair to put this poem above any of them.
I wouldn't want to have to go through this if I were in their shoes. 

9 days ago

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Congrats, again

9 days ago

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I would like to say the new result were satisfactory but Dear Virginia by Boykeats and On Hope and Liberation
John W. May.
Had more initial vote during the voting period four each. And Epic of Tribes had only three.
Why is this in third place and not one of them poetry team have you guys changed the rules. 

9 days ago

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foul play

11 days ago

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A beautiful tribute to a friend.

12 days ago

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well said

12 days ago

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Thank you, means a lot coming from you.

13 days ago

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congrats

13 days ago

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what exactly moved you is it: "In the quiet of the night, pain whispers low" or
A shadowed echo, where the heartbeats slow."
Or
"So let the whispers come, let them be,
For in their song, we find our plea."
Do you know what any of those phrases mean.
The AI was trying to prioritize rhyming or coherency.
That's why the poem sound weird when examined phrase by phrase. It doesn't understand human emotion or nuance but it understands rhyme scheme.
 

13 days ago

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Thank you for the vote, I thought what if I make a people that feels like a script.

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thank you

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there's a reason why I didn't comment on last month's winner poem because I was suspicious about the writing and word choice.

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Thank you

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