Jonsaviours's comments

Here's the list of comments submitted by jonsaviours — There are currently 482 comments total.

	Thank you Steven, this is beautiful. I don't know if I deserve a poem. 3 days ago	View
	glad to have been of service. 8 days ago	View
	Will Powell's Mutiny, Dear Virginia by Boykeats and On Hope and Liberation John W. May. Had 4 votes during the voting period And Epic of Tribes had only three. Logically if votes are counted. It would be highly unfair to put this poem above any of them. I wouldn't want to have to go through this if I were in their shoes. more » 8 days ago	View
	Congrats, again 8 days ago	View
	I would like to say the new result were satisfactory but Dear Virginia by Boykeats and On Hope and Liberation John W. May. Had more initial vote during the voting period four each. And Epic of Tribes had only three. Why is this in third place and not one of them poetry team have you guys changed the rules. more » 8 days ago	View
	foul play 11 days ago	View
	A beautiful tribute to a friend. 12 days ago	View
	well said 12 days ago	View
	Thank you, means a lot coming from you. 13 days ago	View
	congrats 13 days ago	View
	what exactly moved you is it: "In the quiet of the night, pain whispers low" or A shadowed echo, where the heartbeats slow." Or "So let the whispers come, let them be, For in their song, we find our plea." Do you know what any of those phrases mean. The AI was trying to prioritize rhyming or coherency. That's why the poem sound weird when examined phrase by phrase. It doesn't understand human emotion or nuance but it understands rhyme scheme. more » 13 days ago	View
	Thank you for the vote, I thought what if I make a people that feels like a script. 13 days ago	View
	thank you 13 days ago	View
	there's a reason why I didn't comment on last month's winner poem because I was suspicious about the writing and word choice. 13 days ago	View
	Thank you 13 days ago	View
	Thank you for trying it out, as you can see the words, Echo, whisper and shadow and flicker is always present, that is enough evidence. 13 days ago	View
	I read it over and over again and was unimpressed, it lacks nuance and personal touch present in other relatable poems I read during the December contest, what exactly does "pain whispers low" mean, That's not remotely a human expression. more » 13 days ago	View
	it may seem like a joke now, maybe we should all abandon craft and have AI do all our writing. 13 days ago	View
	didn’t you notice it? 13 days ago	View
	also notice the ending of the chatgpt poem end with "So Let the" which is Identical to our winning poem. The administrator of this website should disqualify this poem 13 days ago	View
	I meant notice the words whisper, Echo and shadow 13 days ago	View
	Just asked chatgpt for a poem not the words whisper, Echo and shadow. You are free to do the same post it on here. Grief, a Gentle Shadow Grief comes softly, like a whispering breeze, A shadow cast beneath the tallest trees. It weaves its threads through the fabric of time, A quiet echo, a mournful rhyme. It is the weight of love no longer near, The ache of absence, the sting of a tear. Yet in its depths, a truth takes hold— Grief is love with no hands to hold. It lingers in the spaces once shared, In the silence of moments when none else cared. It’s the sound of laughter etched in the past, A tender reminder that love can last. Grief, though heavy, is not a foe, It teaches us where our hearts must go. To honor the ones who have walked away, And cherish their light in a different way. For grief is a bridge, not a wall to confine, It connects the mortal with the divine. A testament to a bond so deep, It reaches beyond where the living sleep. So let grief flow, let it carve its streams, Through nights of sorrow and fractured dreams. For in its depths, we learn to see— Grief is love’s immortality. more » 13 days ago	View
	I'm not doing this to slander the poet, I've come across lazy written AI generated poems and of course I've paid to participate in this competition just like anyone you. The organizer of this competition are too lazy to see it. There were lots of wonderful poems that deserves to have won the prize not this. You can go to chatgpt right now and generate a poem about grief and the words "Echo, shadows or whisper" will be in it. It just a pattern I've noticed with AI generated poems. Please Administrators do something. more » 13 days ago	View
	This poem is AI generated, if you doubt it, then tell me what does this line mean "A shadowed echo, where the heartbeats slow. It weaves through dreams, a silent, unseen thread," those words are unnatural to use in those other and gpt has a biased preference for using the word echo and whisper. You can go ask it to generate a poem about grief for you right now and you'll most likely get words like shadow, whispers and echo in the poems. more » 13 days ago	View
	This poem is a beautiful and stunning tribute to Virginia Woolf. The Poet writes beautifully about resilience even when it's difficult to keep going. The poem achieves so much and mirrors so much about the unsaid. more » 13 days ago	View
	thank you, exactly what I was going for. 1 month ago	View
	thank you 1 month ago	View
	Succinct 1 month ago	View
	Nice 1 month ago	View
	Very good 1 month ago	View
	Nice narrative 1 month ago	View
	Very emotional 1 month ago	View