Jonsaviours's comments

Here's the list of comments submitted by jonsaviours  —  There are currently 493 comments total.

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I didn't. I sent it in response to the message you sent me

11 hours ago

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I sent you a message since you think I'm the culprit.

12 hours ago

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okay

12 hours ago

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I'm on your side, but since I started posting on this site, they've always been new accounts competing every month alongside the old ones I've never questioned that, it's bound to happen that new users will stumble upon this website and as for winners after all my month going against other people on here, I'm now convinced that's it's more up to luck than talent. As you can see I've stop submitting to the monthly competition. 

12 hours ago

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are you upset because your entry didn't place. Or are against the website getting new users because of exposure

12 hours ago

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twice in a row. although I did win three times in a row, first place, third place and then second place. Congrats again, the writing was astounding

13 hours ago

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Congratulations, this is a beautiful piece

13 hours ago

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Will there be a poem of the year 2024, if so when?
Just curious.

1 day ago

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Wonderful work. Congratulations

10 days ago

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Wonderful, the end is really beautiful.

1 month ago

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I can't stop laughing. Thank you.

1 month ago

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Thank you Steven, this is beautiful.
I don't know if I deserve a poem.

1 month ago

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glad to have been of service.

1 month ago

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Will Powell's Mutiny, Dear Virginia by Boykeats and On Hope and Liberation
John W. May.
Had 4 votes during the voting period And Epic of Tribes had only three.
Logically if votes are counted. It would be highly unfair to put this poem above any of them.
I wouldn't want to have to go through this if I were in their shoes. 

1 month ago

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Congrats, again

1 month ago

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I would like to say the new result were satisfactory but Dear Virginia by Boykeats and On Hope and Liberation
John W. May.
Had more initial vote during the voting period four each. And Epic of Tribes had only three.
Why is this in third place and not one of them poetry team have you guys changed the rules. 

1 month ago

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foul play

1 month ago

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A beautiful tribute to a friend.

1 month ago

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well said

1 month ago

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Thank you, means a lot coming from you.

1 month ago

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congrats

1 month ago

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what exactly moved you is it: "In the quiet of the night, pain whispers low" or
A shadowed echo, where the heartbeats slow."
Or
"So let the whispers come, let them be,
For in their song, we find our plea."
Do you know what any of those phrases mean.
The AI was trying to prioritize rhyming or coherency.
That's why the poem sound weird when examined phrase by phrase. It doesn't understand human emotion or nuance but it understands rhyme scheme.
 

2 months ago

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Thank you for the vote, I thought what if I make a people that feels like a script.

2 months ago

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thank you

2 months ago

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there's a reason why I didn't comment on last month's winner poem because I was suspicious about the writing and word choice.

2 months ago

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Thank you

2 months ago

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Thank you for trying it out, as you can see the words, Echo, whisper and shadow and flicker is always present, that is enough evidence.

2 months ago

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I read it over and over again and was unimpressed, it lacks nuance and personal touch present in other relatable poems I read during the December contest, what exactly does "pain whispers low" mean, That's not remotely a human expression. 

2 months ago

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it may seem like a joke now, maybe we should all abandon craft and have AI do all our writing.

2 months ago

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didn’t you notice it?

2 months ago

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also notice the ending of the chatgpt poem end with "So Let the" which is Identical to our winning poem.
The administrator of this website should disqualify this poem

2 months ago

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I meant notice the words whisper, Echo and shadow

2 months ago

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