Jonsaviours's comments

Here's the list of comments submitted by jonsaviours  —  There are currently 38 comments total.

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Thank you.

9 days ago

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The nature imagery is intoxicatingly vivid and apt, rich with amazing sensory details, this poem is a beautiful love letter to mother nature.
Congrats.

10 days ago

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Thank you, Howl was my inspiration writing this, I'm so glad someone noticed.

10 days ago

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Vivid and haunting.

10 days ago

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Thanks, I'm very happy to hear that.

1 month ago

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thanks a lot.

1 month ago

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Thanks for the kind words, I'm really grateful.

1 month ago

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Thank you.

1 month ago

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Thanks for the vote, I'm glad you liked it.

1 month ago

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Congrats on the win.

1 month ago

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Your poem effectively captures the nostalgia of childhood and the allure of simple pleasures, it subtly touches on themes of poverty and resourcefulness. The children's eagerness to trade rags for toys highlights the scarcity they face.
It has a strong narrative and subtle social commentary. 

1 month ago

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Well written

1 month ago

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thank you

1 month ago

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Impressive

1 month ago

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Thanks, I'm very glad you liked it.

1 month ago

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Thanks man, I appreciate.

1 month ago

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Thank you.

2 months ago

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Thanks but I'm not Russian, I just enjoy russian literature.
This poem is inspired and a tribute to the novel, The Brothers Karamazov by Fyodor Dostoevsky.

2 months ago

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Thanks

2 months ago

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Your poem is lyrical, passionate and well written, i love the sense of urgency and rebellion.
Your use of the cannibal metaphor is both bold and effective in conveying the insatiable willingness to challenge conventional norm.
The thematic depth and use of language is staggering. 

2 months ago

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Thanks for this insightful and nuanced analysis of the poem.

2 months ago

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Thank you, I really appreciate your kind words. I hope the sunlight touches you more beautifully than it does the rest of us.

2 months ago

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Beautifully written

3 months ago

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Cas, this is bloody beautiful.
The anguish, the desperation of loving someone who's sick, the emotional intensity. This is highly original I love it.

3 months ago

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Your poem is vivid with raw emotional honesty that marks poet like Anne Sexton.
Well done.

3 months ago

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Beautiful

3 months ago

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I loved reading this poem. The message, theme and form was incredible.

3 months ago

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thank you. I voted for the summer lady. It's a very nice poem.

3 months ago

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Thank you Betsy, I'm glad you liked it.

3 months ago

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"The best choice is be kind" really resonates with me
It echoes "Primum non nocere" Do no harm..

Congrats by the way.

3 months ago

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Congratulations.. Your poem's beautiful, the world needs more hope.

3 months ago

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Thank you.. I appreciate it.

3 months ago

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