Liquid Pearls Over Glacial Tongues is an interesting metaphor, pearls are smooth and precious, while Glacial Tongues are slow moving and cold. It combines delicate beauty with something harsh and enduring. It deserves my votes because of the complex beautiful and and poetic language.more »
An encouraging response would require the merit of good writing which your work is bereft of, or don't you appreciate the honesty of a good review. Or would you rather I tell you I see a hint Shakespeare in your failings. We are poets, we can bottle critique or praise without a tap on the shoulder.more »