pena_andiiwa
  Junior Member

Nice game

Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm really glad to hear that you enjoyed the verses, even without rhyme. I tried to focus on the form and content to keep the poem strong. Feedback like this is truly encouraging, thanks again more »

Thank you so much for your comment! Your suggestion is really insightful. Placing the second stanza before the fourth could indeed create a stronger flow and emphasize the message of resilience more clearly. I truly appreciate your perspective and will consider revising the poem to make the message even more impactful. Thanks again for your valuable feedback more »