Susannaelliott's comments

This poem has beautiful imagery. The author has very good command of how to use figurative language to create a wonderful and enjoyable reading experience.

It has rhyme and rhythms with great imagery and use of language.

Good use of a range of language features

There are some interesting concepts explored.

Thank you for taking the time to comment. Emotion is where poetry is found.

There was an attempt at rhyming couplets and syllabic patterning that make a poem, poetic.

I like the poetic structure and use of metaphors that convey a strong, emotive message.